huh the uncanny valley of racism

sure bout that

oh he's ignorant or an idiot

Well first your body would puff up as the liquids would turn into gas. Then over a period of a month you would freeze solid depending on the ambient temperature of that area of space. so you wouldn't freeze to death you would just internally explode.

that was cool

it's just your average over powered main character with a sadistic personality, of you were looking for something new and interesting to read I would not suggest this book

the original Hedwig was the one the Hedwig two denied. the female white owl

this better not be like this for the next 20 chaps

I'm getting sick of this mc

oh your pulling that card i aint touching this novel good day

F#cking snowflakes

i hate the fact you didn't add a spoiler to this comment you as#hole

he's just giving constructive criticism you fool

yikes what was I smoking when I wrote this a year ago. but ya the quality has dropped tbh

one more thing reading massive blocks of texts is off putting for most readers I suggest formatting your paragraphs into smaller more manageable chunk so the readers don't get lost when reading. Your's truly a concerned reader.

it's looking good but you should look up the proper way to use the word "and". I've noticed a lot of run on sentences. you need to figure that out. look it up on YouTube that will help I'm sure. gl

thx

ment 12

I was getting to like the story and all the interesting plot developments, but after the author turned the story into a harrem I lost interest. good first 25 chapters though.