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I am here again to do another review for the novel. If you want to read this, you may have to consider the points I am going to point out. Writing Quality: Check Stability of Updates: Currently check. Story Development: Reading up 'til the latest chapter, I realized that the story is really developing well. If you are confused with some chapters, particularly chapters 40-60, you would be confused why the mc would choose to be lowkey despite his power. He could just terrorize everyone with his powers and use it to find his target (u will know if u've read it coz he's too overpowered). However, he didn't do that and it seemed like it was done on purpose to make him realize that being passive wouldn't always be the solution to every problem he is facing. It seems like in the next arc, he would really change, I can tell. Perhaps. I hope so. Character Design: The main character's personality is a bit twisted. I think that not everyone in reality is consistent with what they say or do as well, so it's quite reasonable to me. I think his thinking and philosophies about the world are not yet mature despite his soul's(???) age. On the other hand, I really love his two present disciples. They're quite likable. World Background: It wasn't as stable as it was in the beginning, but it was getting clearer as the story progresses. Overall, keep it up, author-nim!

I am at Chapter 70 now. So far, the story has been good. Writing Quality: There are definitely things that you may question from the start. However, I realized subconsciously that they are being slowly realized as the novel goes on, but as these are realized, new mysteries would also come in. As for the writing quality, I could barely see any mistakes on the chapters all throughout. The writing was pretty decent, so far. Stability of Updates: Fellow Daoists, you definitely have nothing to worry about this. The author updates every day. Only in June when he did not because I think he gave himself some break (?)... Story Development: His first disciple's plight seemed so simple compared to the second arc with his second disciple already involved. However, that should how the story progresses. At least to me. In the beginning, it is quite boring but the later chapters (i meant chapter 50 and above, i think) were not. With this, there was development going on. Character Design: I am a bit confused when it comes to Yang Lujia. He's got a twisted personality but he's smart. According to the chapters I have read, I think it's got something to do with his conflicting emotions of trying to change himself but would always end up doing so badly in these terms. I look forward to the reason why he is being like this. World Background: In the beginning, it was really vague to me. However, as the story continues, it seems like it slowly becomes clearer to the mind. Even the descriptions were topnotch (to me). I don't know about you, ofc. But I would highly recommend this for those who loves an overpowered main character. The "weak to strong" concept does not apply here. From the very start, he's already overpowered. I also just wonder why he became overpowered over just a short period of time. Keep it up, authorrr! Honestly, this has the potential to become famous. Hehe.