Casson_Westerfield

As long as what you suggest does not vear too far from my storyline.

yes I am

I think that it is definitely an interesting book since it gets steamy right from chapter 1 instead of the bush I definitely was not expecting it. has decent character development and storyline so far keep up all the good work I will be rooting for you until the end.

can you tell me the name of the website or your discord username then so that I can see if this is a journey that I want to take for my writing

thank you for the tip

when I first looked at the book I was expecting very boring and basic concepts that were done all the time; but I noticed that this book is a true work of art definitely five stars all around keep up all the good work from one writer to another.

I definitely enjoyed the six chapters that I read. this story was very detailed just the way I like it definitely a solid 4.5 star review. keep up the good work from one author to another; I wish you the best of luck on your journey.

yes there is a book one for this and it is called the paradisus Chronicles. that book of mine has a lot more mistakes just so you know because I did that one completely by hand on a computer rather than doing speech to text to my phone. when I finish book two I will be rewriting book 1.

I only read five chapters so far but I definitely think this story is quite interesting creative and very descriptive it makes me feel like I am present in the moment with the characters and I truly love that fact. there were some word gaps and mistakes but that's no big deal I mean editors exist for a reason and from one author to another I understand you can never get it right the first or second time. keep up all the good work I will be rooting for you and your success in this adventure and count me as an official fan of this book.

is definitely a good start and has points for originality so keep up the good work from one author to another I hope that you enjoy your writing journey as well as your readers enjoying it as much as you should. keep the updates coming because I will be joining you on this journey and reading everything.