Same idea but a whole different story with more depth of everything 😉

Let me know what you think of the novel, and feel free to ask me any questions.

Well, if by "effective" you mean turning a chaotic street brawl into an impromptu yoga class on the pavement, then yes, jiu-jitsu is perfect! You'll be the calm, collected person giving hugs (with a chokehold) while everyone else is throwing wild punches. Just remember to avoid any armbar demos on hard concrete – your opponent's elbow might not be the only thing that snaps!

Well if I got enough pateron for this story then i will think about it 😅

oh that's what you are talking about, actually i don't know much about that since here in India we use first name rather than last name

I tried to understand what you wanted to say but i still can't understand 😞

You know what i am going to just delete this novel

A fantastic novel where the MC is not your ordinary cult leader in the world of Marvel. I hope you all enjoy this novel, and yes, it will be a harem 😉

Resist the temptation

Well got some work to do

No

Don't get angry boy, now I edited the chapter.

Same but better in grammar and highlight more fact then previous novel

Better version than the previous one

his pateron has not updated for months

I can understand your argument, which i fully agree with and will try to change it at least 1. one thought but for 2. i don't think other readers especially patreon members will agree.

better grammar and clear explanation

interesting, also i am writing a novel but for grammar correction I am using chatgpt , will this still make the story sound like gtp even if, I am just using it for grammar correction.

Yes this scene is after that