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Woah… The first words I find myself uttering is just woah! Author started off the novel in complete suspense and then at the first ten chapter, there became a whole different plot twist… woah! I’m left speechless, but this novel is worth the read. I’m totally enjoying every seconds spent in reading ☺️☺️
Dear . This is the mistakes you made . "I love you Jack" instead of "I love you Jack." Try reading that chapter again to understand what I'm saying
It seemed you always forget to put full before the quotation ending
Having a suspense at the end of each chapters is what I'm currently feeling . Unlike most novels you can easily guess how it's going to end just by reading the first chapter but this is different . I'm not sugarcoating this novel, but explaining how I felt . The characters development was wonderful, the plot twist is more than excellent. The only error I saw in this novel is that sometimes the author forget to put a quotation after the sentence of a person ended . Also the author sometimes use first person point of view in place of third person pov . Other than that this is a must read, and I didn't even think twice before adding this book to library . If you want a novel that would keep you to the hook, then this is it . Beside I don't praise novels but this novel have a great potential and if the author edit her errors this is in her book then it would be super cool 💕😊
I must admit, this is getting more interesting . Definitely adding it to my Library 💕
Aww 🥺
He said
No quotation mark here😅
At the last paragraph, you were explaining jack thought but you were using first person point of view . Writing the last paragraph instead of using (I) use (He)