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Good read, and good story by the author. What i want to point out is the intriguing storyline, the backstory and lore seems interesting and also the worldbuilding. One thing that can be improved is the writing style, specially the exchange of dialogues between the characters. There are also some grammar mistakes, but they're so minimal that they don't affect the overall reading experience. Overall, the story is great and has lot of potential. Will definetely keep this to my list as I wait for more chapters to be published.
nice, keep it going
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ok... things are getting interesting