Amethyst_Harney

I really love your overall concept, the multi world/ Sifi feel is exactly what I love! The way you introduced the world they are in I think is really smart, and almost movie-esk. The way it builds you up to know how the world is the way it is is very nice. Love it!

Absolutely mesmerizing! I love the theatrical visonary you use when the woman is running threw the woods, to when she’s at the gates dripping on blood. It really brings the fear and drama to a readers heart!!

I absolutely agree with the below review! Your writing style and your detailing is very poetic, along with the mysterious romance/ fantasy I am definitely wanting to come back and read more!!

Oh my gosh! The intensity of the first moments really hook you into the story. Your descriptive details are a very nice draw in for a reader, brings you to where the MC is and I really love that in a book!

Really like the feel of this first chapter. Draws the reader into wanting to learn more, but not giving too much context to feel overwhelmed! The wonder left over is very enticing

Loving the way you describe the entry scene, really draws you into the intensity Of what the character is fighting for!