CarsonRome_432

Started off well. Flopped when the scene entered naruto. Another good novel gone wrong.

I rarely write reviews, but this one of the few exceptions. The book started off somewhat strange as even up till chapter 180 I still can't decide if only Batman and manhunter knows that their world is an entertainment for another earth. I loved the Avatar part though. It's truly overpowered, much stronger than the Avatar in the cartoons and good reason and explanation behind it too. unlike others, I don't care about MC's lame jokes but rather how his Love life always seems to take a hit every time. His falling out with the league was ok and warranted. Overall the story was kinda good but the MC's life was just way too depressing after the falling out. I couldn't bear it anymore after chapter 180 where his relationship with star took a hit as well. Also, why alongside characters like Lucifer, Olympian God's and Lord's of hell at such an early stage?

😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣😂🤣😥🤣🤣😥😥🤣🤣🤣😂🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂🤣🤣 #Asking fr Saitama powers and getting an eternal bald head? That one got me laughing like crazy. Forget anything else, just the ingenuity chapter one deserves my five 🌟. Take em.

Fellow webnovelist, You have my sincere thanks for the raws.❤️❤️❤️❤️💢💢💥🔥💥💥🔥💢🙌👐👍🙌👐🙌✊🙌✊🙌

Shit, not even the author of blood warlock went that far

Awesome. I finally found a new novel that makes me excited. I hope the system shop has something to help his first wife become more beautiful and increase her talent so she can cultivate. Also can the author please limit the number of wives he will have. I mean, having too many wives ain't too good either and it will be kinda frustrating for character development. Anyway all the best

It has potential especially for a book written by a new author. My thoughts on the subject is to try and limit the speed at which the MC breaks through. At least make sure that the explanation for his extremely fast breakthrough speed is full proof. And elixir that makes someone break through from late With refinement to mid stage foundation establishment is truly too exaggerated. If such an elixir exists, why isn't there any mention of it in the market? Why can't it be made by alchemists? If the level of the elixir is of a higher grade than what the alchemists in the current world background can make, then how did such a medicine find its way into a rock in a sect thoroughly escaping the notice of higher level cultivators just waiting for someone to pick up. And not just anyone, a normal sect disciple for that matter. These are just one of the points I feel should be looked into. thanks for responding

Is the MC and the author sick in the head? The system said that the kids family reinforcements were coming and the MC told himself to finish the fight fast. Yet instead of fighting With the full power of tenth stage enlightenment realm, he lowered his strength to match the enemies first level enlightenment realm. With the ridiculous excuse of knowing thy enemy? How pathetic. As you would expect from the stupid actions of a braindead MC, reinforcements came and he had to flee, not finishing his fight and killing a member of he protagonist team. Not to mention, the writing quality truly isn't good, I feel like the cultivation realms are too rushed and there is no emphasis on how age and cultivation base releases to talent. And why would someone at the first level of enlightenment realm be able to fight someone in the fifth level? Is the boost of power within cultivation realms so low? Honestly, this novel is average now that I think bout it. No offense author, that's the truth.

The story had me hooked until he met his new mother. Kinda lost interest after his father met he fox lady or something. Its not my cup of tea but its a great read. 4.6⭐🌟🌟✨ for me

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