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DaoistuQngeZ42minRespondeu a MIR_DevalanciCh 3 Audition- DaoistuQngeZ49minRespondeu a PsUp
True, but imo it kinda turned bad when Andy left.
Seeing the title, Lucas's mind practically went blank with excitement. He thought to himself, "Isn't this one of the successful TV series from my previous life!?" His heart raced with anticipation. - DaoistuQngeZ23hRespondeu a IllusiveoneCh 24 The Kraken’s Last Stand
- DaoistuQngeZ1dComentouCh 24 The Kraken’s Last Stand
- DaoistuQngeZ1dComentouCh 19 Chapter 19.
- DaoistuQngeZ1dComentouCh 73 Lorenzo's proposal, and his scheme
- DaoistuQngeZ2dRespondeu a Avi2112Ch 39 Chapter 38: Can you feel it, Aunt?
- DaoistuQngeZ2dComentouCh 38 Chapter 37: I am doing him a favour
- DaoistuQngeZ3dComentouCh 13 Chapter 12 : Before the Tourney
- DaoistuQngeZ3dRespondeu a HeroDuT1998
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Was she stupid? He remembered thinking: Every battle commander wants their adversary to make a mistake, so he said. "Of course he does. What should I do differently?" He asked so they could make a different plan. But Sansa only said. "I don't know anything about battles, just don't do what he wants you to do." "Aye, that's good advice." He told the women, who gave him nothing but complaints and bad news. It all came down that night. He felt unhappy. He felt like a failure, he fought for her, but she only complained, and Rickon, poor Rickon, that chance was also gone. So when he shows his little brother run across that battlefield, a primal urge to save him, he doesn't care about his own anymore. He just wants his little brother saved. - DaoistuQngeZ3dComentou
So he still Made the same mistake as the show?
Was she stupid? He remembered thinking: Every battle commander wants their adversary to make a mistake, so he said. "Of course he does. What should I do differently?" He asked so they could make a different plan. But Sansa only said. "I don't know anything about battles, just don't do what he wants you to do." "Aye, that's good advice." He told the women, who gave him nothing but complaints and bad news. It all came down that night. He felt unhappy. He felt like a failure, he fought for her, but she only complained, and Rickon, poor Rickon, that chance was also gone. So when he shows his little brother run across that battlefield, a primal urge to save him, he doesn't care about his own anymore. He just wants his little brother saved. - DaoistuQngeZ3dComentouCh 24 Fire, Blood and Growth
- DaoistuQngeZ4dComentou
So, for this type of display, you may have to show something like +1 or ^ to indicate that the skill has increased.
Skills- Sword Proficiency (basic-3), Dagger Proficiency (basic-1), Shield Proficiency(basic-3), Ridding Proficiency (basic-1), Archery (basic-1), Handwriting (basic-1), Reading (basic-1), Arithmetic (basic-1), Observation (basic 4), Inspire (basic 2) - DaoistuQngeZ4dComentou
Author, may i suggest that Rhaenyra and Jace to do tours in the future to make some connection or something like that, because it did make sense that had Civil War occur, she Will be at disadvantage from isolating her self in Dragonstone while the Greens remained at Kings Landing and growing stronger.
Ch 20 Gold and Power - DaoistuQngeZ4dComentou
I know it sounds quite a reach and unlikely considering their stand, but i kinda wish that Jace learn in Citadel and earn chain Links in some if not all kinds of study. The Unchained Prince
Helaena and Daella nodded eagerly, Jace had to admit the idea of a tournament was exciting, though he had to admit he didn't have much experience jousting. He was, however, a natural at horse riding, how could he not be, he was a dragon rider, and riding a horse is easy compared to such things. As the feast began to wind down, Jace's mind returned to the idea of knighthood. He knew it wouldn't be an easy path, but the more he thought about it, the more he was convinced that it was the right one, he would be the Crown Prince one day when his mother took the throne, it wouldn't be seemly for a Prince to not be Knighted. - DaoistuQngeZ4dComentou
I kinda mention this in the last chapter, but Daella and Helaena need to do something to contribute to the story and help Jace, So far they're just there (I know that they help him as an emotional support, but still). I suggest reduce their time screen(not sure if it's the right word).
Ch 20 Gold and Power - DaoistuQngeZ4dComentou
For that to happen, Daemon needs to stay in Kings Landing. Which seems unlikely, considering he would be by Laena's side due to her condition
As the feast continued Jace started to think of something that had plagued his thoughts constantly since he had returned and started taking his training seriously. Knighthood, he realised that he wanted one for himself, Jace was at an age where many noble boys began to squire for knights, of course as a prince he didn't need to do such things, but he didn't feel right about not having such an important title. He wanted to become a warrior of great renown, so he'd feel a little ridiculous not having the title to go with it. Daemon was a renowned warrior, his prowess in battle legendary. If anyone could mentor Jace and guide him to knighthood, it was his uncle. As the evening wore on, Jace resolved to think more on this later. For now, he turned his attention back to the girls beside him, determined to enjoy the feast. He had been so lost in thought that he realized he hadn't spoken much to Helaena and Daella. - DaoistuQngeZ4dComentouCh 3 Chapter 3): Anything in Gacha!
- DaoistuQngeZ4dRespondeu a LazyCavemanCh 2 Benjen I