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Bring back the old cover, the new one is trash.

Damn it was so good!

I'm already a little disappointed, tomorrow there will be some shit again that will interrupt everything.

Another teenage wish-fulfillment fanfic. The character of the main character is constantly changing, he does not think with his head, if only with the bottom. One feels that the author still thinks like a teenager who is no more than 18 years old. I don’t know why there are such high ratings here; if it weren’t for plot armor and wish fulfillment, he would have died or become a slave.

Having read all the author’s stories, I would like the main character to try to somehow gain immortality or longevity. The concept, history, dialogues - everything is good, but again: the same elves live 2-3 thousand years, and the average person in this world is less than 100. I wish the main character was a little more of a slut. And the very concept that a person from our world did not even learn magic when he got into the magical world is such an absurdity. Transfer the scenery from a fantasy world to a regular one - nothing will change.

It's actually a pretty cool piece, especially his wife, a sort of mix of mentally unstable homelander on minimal wages. Well, if it weren't for a little nonsense in the middle and too many action scenes with no time to "rest", then it would be 10 out of 10, but 9 out of 10. I recommend reading it and am really looking forward to the second volume.

Of course, the work itself is simply terrible and disgusting, 10 out of 10. The characters are lively, the scenery is appropriate, there are some things that are not logical, but they are not so critical. A very living tragedy that is difficult to find in current books. The book, despite everything, is serious and you can’t just sit down and relax your brain. I recommend this book and will even say that it could be successfully sold. And I speak as a Russian author who lives from selling books.