Lucius_arcadia

bueno, ¿qué puedo decir aparte de que lo leíste correctamente hasta el final porque no dice nada después del capítulo 4 y, en primer lugar, Arthur no es del prototipo sino que es una versión alternativa como saber alter y su personalidad puede ser? un poco diferente y, lo más importante, es un AU, por lo que definitivamente no incluirá algunos detalles, pero lo haré similar, pero divergirá después de un tiempo y sobre que Paul no puede usar Touki, bueno, lo siento, olvidé agregar que puede usarlo, pero él no puede usar magia e incluso en el original, Touki no fue mencionado al principio, así que yo tampoco lo hice, y Arthur lo copió, lo siento, no es lo mismo, lo que usó es fusionar magia y habilidad con la espada, no es Touki el que no lo hace. eso y sobre Arthur no mostrando sus poderes, leíste la novela completa, aunque no mostró todas sus habilidades, sí mostró su noble fantasma, lo que causó una gran conmoción. Vale, sé que esta novela puede no ser perfecta, pero criticar sin comprender completamente. no es algo que recomendaríawell, what can I say other than you read it correctly until the end because it doesn't say anything after chapter 4 and first of all, Arthur is not the prototype but is an alternative version as saber alter and his personality can be? a little different and most importantly it's an AU so it definitely won't include some details I'll make it similar but it will diverge after a while about Paul not being able to use Touki, well sorry I forgot to add that can use it, but he can't use magic and even in the original, Touki wasn't mentioned at the beginning so I didn't either, and Arthur copied it, sorry it's not the same, what he used is fuse magic and skill with the sword, it's not Touki who doesn't. That and about Arthur not showing his powers, did you read the whole novel, although he didn't show all of his abilities, he did show the noble phantasm, which caused quite a stir. Okay, I know this novel may not be perfect, but criticizing without fully understanding. It's not something I would recommend.

I believe Ruby already explained what a program is referencing the chapter"You see, it's all about designing the spell, inputting commands, and using mana as the medium to execute those instructions."and about Arthur knowing what a program is well he is a disciple of Merlin so he can at least understand it

isn't that water breathing style

Thanks for pointing out

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