suck a Fucking Dick this story is not about Flash and his powers alone you had to ruin it with system Garbage shit oh 😱 let's give one of the most OP Character in existence even more OP powers like just explore his speed you will not need other powers plus having the meta knowledge was already enough and Flash only looses in comic because of Bullshit Comic plot so you much be some stupid looser who thinks powers = means good plot suck a Dick

just an other system garbage 😒 like just kys

well one of the most important thing in a story is there should be a Story first of all, being a Author is a Hard task and making the shit up is not easy but this author has written a lot but there is noting serious or world Building about it so in shot the most important thing is the vibe yes vibe and tone of the story and the world building and how well it can Make people give a fuck about it characters are really important but not that much if the story itself is not good a lot of Authors focus to much on the characters and fight scene should not be to long and nither to many .

I wanted to give this a perfect score but the story is stretched a lot and MC is very one Dimension in a way and it feels like he is still in training ark 😭 after 500+ chapters and he is going from School ark to bigger school ark where he will now meet other APEX kids and he will have to train more like when will the training ark ends and some real impacrtful story Begins this is why i like Shadow slave there is no training ark just Fight tooth and nail and Survive in between

yuko is not a Bear she is a cow

this is sooo much better then Dimensional Decent this Does not feel hollow characters feel human finally

inspired from shadow slave great 😃👍

very hot 🥵

can you shut up with the stats man they mean nothing

bro even MTLs of the most racist Chinese shits are better then this i Don't have a Problem with MLP it's about the story or the lack of story he has written plot points with no explanation or a story it's feels 100% written by AI you have to be 5 years old to find anything interesting in this and if you Do feel a lot of shame

bruh what was this so short and nothing was in it its so bad its so stupid to its like writing a story and the entire story is told by the narrator like: "then the hero marched forward with his new army and sword to kill the evil Dragon and with his holy sword noting was impossible so they succeeded and the hero claimed the Dragons heart and won the heart of the princess and they loved each other and lived happily" THE END

the very moment that magic Bitch the Bald head stupid Bitch showed up i Dropped it fuck it

so tired of this fucking plot where the MC just goes to learn magic so retarted fuck you it's like every fanfic now Ancient one is not that big of a Deal in Marvel stories why the fuck you have to put him in there why can't we just have a normal plot progression everything is a confidence and convinent fucking garbage magic

kinda stupid i hope it won't end up in a fight with X men in a Day or him falling for jean she is a cum-dumbster for the entire universe plus you are making his powers to convinent add some friction to the story God Dame bro you are writing words with no much meaning plus he is to nive and childish so make sure his character grows

God speed then soilder i almost fell Down the MLT root but I cared about my braincells and i hate racist Chinese so I am safe but i hope you get better if you have nothing to read then read warhammer 40k it has 400+ Official novels but Don't worry it won't be more then 15 million words and that's light work for a fanfic addict and my brainrot is in My little pony fanfics so I will not judge

at what point it's an attack on your human intelligence

would still not make sense to be that sloppy

Dame bro if they kiss I would have Died that's pure Bromance right there

written very poorly it feels childish and Dumb makes no sense like just read the aunt mays response it makes no sense and there was a lack of scene and how it happened the characters are so one Dimensional it's painful it feels like a translation or writting by a child who can make a story in his head but can't write it out

atleast make the sex scenes better