Author is it true?

Thanks for replying and acknowledging my idea.... I read a few chapters by now. This is really good. Really Glad, I saw this here. 🥂 Cheers to the novel!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Yeah I agree with you.... But she must fell in love with him first and only for her to realize her past mistakes and feel IMMENSE regret. Asher will always ignore her... But later on will accept her as a maid, not a wife though... Something like this... Also, Author regarding Aira-----Well, don't forgive her that easily... (Well, I just jump ahead reading your comments, I am still on the chapter "Pitiful hunter or whatever the name...")

Well man, you hooked me just with the FAQ... Let's see how your novel is... P.S: Will there be cold female leads? You See I have some sort of weird fetish... I like to see Female leads (or a Female lead) is cold and ruthless even for the MC, so much so that he got fed up with her... But after he distanced himself from her (or them), she (or all of them) fell in love with him and pursue him... Yeah, I know this is an odd one. But I really like reading a novel where the MC is not a simp... [Anyway, the MC will be back with that Girl/s but that wouldn't be easy for them to dual-cultivate😉]

Where are you?

Author here, Do any of you have any suggestions for the novel?

When will that be? It's been some time now..

Hey, write the book, will you?

Well never mind, I already read it...

Man, Are you crazy? What's going on here? It's normal for an author to review his/her work. After all they are readers of their own works. Afterall, from all those reviews present, one or two more doesn't work. If i were to say in mathematics, if the review count is 4.69... then after two more reviews it will still be the same considering many reviews it has. It will perhaps increase the rating to 4.6901. I guess you understand this...

do you have that pic with you, now? I am new to the novel, so I don’t know what you are talking about?[img=thinking]

Sigh! To your story, To what you wanted, you did well. I mean you wanted to hit at something and you did. And we also thought why did that happen? BUT, You could have done for some other scenario, I just feel...*Sigh* Let's not talk about it. Since I know no one is at wrong here, I will keep reading with my mouth shut (As I always did...) But even if all changes, I will never get myself to like Irina as a character, maybe I won't hate her, maybe I'll become neutral. That's what happen with Xia Qingyue of Against the Gods. She did everything for Yun che, but the way she did or to be precise, the way author delivered it made me drop the novel. But here it was not to that extreme, since you showed things related to Leon and irina in flashbacks. So it's fine.... Well anyway, calm down mate, And write well while also balancing your studies, You can do that. i think this is your first book. right? Write your second, third and so on... You will be a great author, because your first attempt is already better than others. At least better than mine.

That's why I didn't give 1 star. but 3 stars. The story was good. I read it happily. But I feel irritated on how you wrote until, chapter 202 (I am there currently). I mean I didn't stop reading. I am reading, and if I am satisfied with the future story, i will edit this and give the maximum I can. I am still reading and will keep reading... But what annoyed me is how you delivered Irina's part. Not any otherthing, They maybe Lies. But Irina felt it as real, so did Leon. So even if they are lies, even if leon knows they maybe lies, even if Irina knows that she was manipulated, the way you delivered is what you made me frustrated. Like, You could have not used other Leon to control Leon's actions. It just felt forced. Ah! whatever, I will just see what happens.

Author, If you are seeing this, I am not telling you that this Novel is bad. It's quite good and the start is also good. But somehow you took some wrong decisions. Even if Irina becomes a Loveinterest or normal mother, I don't care since this is a fantasy. But the way you delivered that is what went wrong. I'll continue reading, after all I also want to see the truth, Seph's battle etc. But I am not really fond of this novel as I was before. I honestly want to see Irina as a love interest, not because of any other reason but because, I want to see how MC forgives her and accept her. After all, knowingly or unknowingly what she did doesn't justify. (It's because of how you wrote that everything happened due to some external force, that this went downhill for me. You could have written like, although she was controlled, even she subconsciously didn't care much for her son due to his low potential) Writing quality for me is 5/5

Well, I read some more chapters. But i feel disgusted and 'cringe' with the recent developments. I mean in one of next chapters. "Mot..I mean Woman..." This is a phrase uttered by him, and Irina feels the motherly love. It's normal to feel mother's love. But Leon (maybe there are same...But for now they aren't, ) so why call her 'mother'... I just... Maybe I'll drop it. Author, If you are seeing this, I am not telling you that this Novel is bad. It's quite good and the start is also good. But somehow you took some wrong decisions. Even if Irina becomes a Loveinterest or normal mother, I don't care since this is a fantasy. But the way you delivered that is what went wrong. I'll continue reading, after all I also want to see the truth, Seph's battle etc. But I am not really fond of this novel as I was before.

Honestly What's Author doing? A good book, just because he want to make the bond working again 'by some supernatural things involved'. I first hooked into the novel, thinking she will regret a lot for many chapters. And also perhaps she age due to regret and finally MC cures her. But doesn't allow her to be a part of his life. He will forgive her, But later. Not like this...This is just...

Such a thing happened.....Then should I perhaps....stop reading it.

Yep

You earned yourself a new fan then. ❤️ Should I purchase it today or in the next month? only 7 days for the end of the month, right?