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It's a good novels , with no errors that stand out. thou since advice for the author, it's wayyy too fast paced and chapters are very short. you could have really spent 2-5 on every development of his story it'll still be faced paced but filled with more detail and depth. there's not much attachment to the mc now as everyone praises him,his parents(after not believing in him in the first few chaps),the fans ,the system ,the coaches ,the world. you've got something with alot of greatness all over it, but it needs more realism ,conversations, depth and length. at this pace he'd become the goat in a few years.
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21 the day I was born in December in 2001.
one way just Google how to do it for yo phone . my way is taking a screen shot, cropping it to be only the words I wanna translate ,then you'll will scan that or copy it and paste on Google, it will give you sites not in English click on any then translate the page ,search the chap you were on .