Siluian

This story gets better and better. I'm amazed and also waiting to see what's next. Great job, and thanks for sharing. It's very generous of you

Me encanta la historia, el nivel de profundidad y desarrollo, se nota que está muy bien pensado todo y eso resulta en una historia bien lograda

I think it is an excellent idea, it has coherence and solid foundations. The author knows the characters and you can tell that he has thought about the best characteristics that his own characters could have. Keep it up! you are on a very good path

Atila ;)

I think it is an excellent idea, it has coherence and solid foundations. The author knows the characters and you can tell that he has thought about the best characteristics that his own characters could have. Keep it up! you are on a very good path