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honestly plz don't end up making the family gud... it wud be way too generic I mean let there be differences between the MC and the family I wanna see a enemy type of dynamic where the family will see and regret that how they f**d up there future as they die. Kinda villanous but new
well the entire assessment incident went a bit too cliche guess can't be helped with chunni author lol~
kinda getting boring i dk y... the developments are way too slow i guess.. don't stretch the arcs more than necessary... it make the chapters feel like nothing is happening in them
Nope more likely that u r that demon king and u died but somehow sent the system to the past to survive
it seems the demon king from the vision is him. that's y system said survive
author went from urban fantasy to fantasy to now geopolitical triller lol
i dk the thing is that first 40 chapters are really hard to read. Honestly the MC is not likable at least till now. I can kinda understand y there aren't many readers for this novel. Only veteran readers can get past till here i guess. but nowadays most veteran don't wanna read reincarnation based novels. U sud have made the MC a bit less edgy in the begining maybe that wud have helped to attract new readers
chatjk... well I guess soon chatgpt will also be there 😂
bro just one thing... use grammarly it will help to correct the grammatical errors
throughout the chapter I think instead of laine it should be ra