Hahahah that was funny. But seeing milotics experience, i feel sorry for her. She mustve been lonely waiting for decades.

One of the moments Im frustrated why Pokemon court mtl is simply unreadable. Tsk awesome chapter and a great showing.

Nah thats just dumb. If it ruined your day because i had a review or opinion about it, sucks for you. Maybe do better. Theres like millions of pics online about pokemon and youd have to choose an AI that doesnt look like a legit pokemon at all. That already says something about you and your story, so why waste on a story that could "possibly" be ai assisted too or if not, just some lazy writing.

You have a life outside? Im surprised. Lol just kidding. I was just asking because i got it bookmarked because i want to visit it from time to time only to have it load for few minutes without any appearance. So i thought you deleted it.

Anyone would assume. Wheres your brain when you choose that as a display picture when its clearly not pokemon. Get some brain.

Bruh did you delete your new pokefic? Why?

Wheres the fic? Dyou delete it?

Cool display picture. I imagine mc based on the title as a safari zone ranger? Or just a trainer who likes spending their time in the wild, mountains etc.

Gender swap? And nonchalant about it? Pass

Man at least make the display picture not hilarious. I can see the face of squirtle and swellow. Whyd you have to use Ai there are plenty of pokemon pictures on the internet? Makes be doubt if youre really writing the fanfic or just another Ai assisted plot.

I check all the time what new pokemon fanfic is uploaded or what fanfic has been updated again. Looking forward to your story.

Can we throw in a chansey/clefairy assistant mon there author? Who does healing and gravity training lol

Really thought its gonna be Torchic because his name is Sunny and is a fighting enthusiast. But midkip is best starter too so very understandable.

Mudkip. Pls i forgot its typing lol

Muay thai. Very nice. For a starter, i wish a trapinch lol. Ive been searching for good pecialists mc, specially ground types.

Dunno about Rina, but for Rex, is this even a first gym badge battle? A Slaking in a 1st gym badge battle. What did the chinese author smoke lol

Your sentences look like paragraphs.

Hello Author, friendly advice please use periods or dots instead of comma.

For a light hearted story, the display pic made it seem grim.

Awesome slice of life. And a little bit of battling. Probably he'll be as strong as an elite 4 in a years time or more and he wouldnt know lol. Thanks for the chap.