Mr_Walid

Serafall is a super devil

dude don't mind but your fanfic is not that appealing. i have read all the martial peak fanfic available but your one is one of the last ranked ones.

bro fix your writing style and punctuations. you can use chatgpt to correct it.

get him su Yan and ning xue first and then pic the most beautiful ones

hey why does your fic is making sato do all the hero work. are you trying to make Naruto and Sasuke side characters.

dude your grammar is horrible. use chatgpt and your misspelling genders all the time

why would you need to watch over him. just could have been a Nobel son of a kingdom and be done with it

nice chapter. but try to improve your writing style and punctuation.