Tharun_Chintu_2602

pilot is good and it seems like a good story and will wait for more chapters

Excellent start. Nice characterisarions. Thorougly enjoyed every line of the story. Looking forward for the next part. This story will definitely rock. Good luck.

the pilot is good and it's promising story. will look forward to more of the story. The opening was different considering some. i think the story will have good oncoming chapters