Nyxxie_Auclair
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I just finished reading the first season, it's a very good novel. I did not find any grammar flaws. Almost all areas of this work are excellent. Will definitely recommend this book. It has a unique plot, which as a writer I love. The author did a very good job. The only thing I found a little uncomfortable during reading was that, the author does a lot of telling instead of showing. Other than that this novel is really good.
EGGSCUSE ME
Its a really well written book and has a lot of potential! The emotions, characters are all well written! Except the few typos and grammar errors, this book was a wonderful read for me
typo
isnt the fact already known?
This novel is really well written! Good job author~ I added it to my collection! It has an interesting premise and is an easy read. I wish I could read all the chapters, but sadly I have to wait. I will be cheering you on!
he...called her hun
use single quotes since double is for dialogue
I want this sksksksks
crouched? crochet = knit
Wha- she's a ghost?
wanted*
That's quite rare, considering they're mafia
Wooo Master
An hour later, someone entered the study. I did not need to lift my head to know who they were.
entered* typo I think
Um sir, can you throw those cufflinks in the direction of this trash can. I can sell- I mean recycle them
Hello. It's time for Shameless Author Review. Idk how to write this without sounding very uhh narcissistic but here we go. One, I for one love the gore scenes I write in the novel. It's so much exciting to write this. (That's why you may find other areas lacking, I apologise.) It's a bit of a fast paced novel. I'm working on it. And I love how Mercy comes to accept her desires instead of sticking to what she was taught to do and restricting herself. I have 0 opinion on the ML. Yep, he's the abandoned child here. Ahem, so that's it I guess. Hope you enjoy my novel! With Love, Nyx