Well written first chapter. I commend you for that fellow author

I love how well-written the author did towards the story. I may have understand it a little but it shares a potential to make it romantic in the soon future when I read this. I sure hope that you prosper towards this masterpiece you made. Off I go, Anna

Hey Anna I am here to read it now. Be sure to repay a favour haha.

I love how it turned out actually. The writing quality is superb and the characters are well-defined. I'll definitely looking forward to read this. Byeee

I only read the prologue so far but I know something will be interesting the more I read them. It has this vibe that you want to know more just by expressing on how they move and gesture. The World Background is good and the writing quality is great. I do hope the writer will make more chapters in order for me to understand and get away from the real world just by reading and imagining and pretending I'm the protagonist. Nice job!

I love how it turned out. A classic hard working girl trying to help her own family. I surely would love to see her be with a man that deserves her. Nice work Fellow Novelist!!!

I love the first chapter. Keep it up

From what I've read so far from chapter 1, I have to say it is a well written story. But small mistakes from those details derailed me from focusing. Like first you should fix whether it is first person pov or second person pov. And the first words from the paragraphs has lowered cases, try not to repeat this habit. But so far the writing quality and the world background is superb. The story is great and I do hope you learned more enough for me to take some samples of your writing quality. Good Job 👍

That's a well written chapter.

Your essay or Their essay?

Add a apostrophe in this statement if this is what Y/N said

Capitalized at the beginning

Never put first person pov and second person pov together, just put Y/N.

Also this, you should choose whether it is a first person or second person pov

You should add some prepositions like as or whereas like that at the start of this paragraph. I just don't tend to put lowercase at beginning of the paragraph.

Uhmmm the 9th and 10th paragraph is the same. Remove it at once

Shameless author here, just gonna rate my story. About how the potential of my story foretells, it has the fantasy of meeting ones' imagination. Characters from the story merges and jumps to the land of the gods if they may say. Hoping I could get more positive reviews and soon this story will flourish one day. Thanks for reading!

I like your review dude

I love how it turned out, a classic dungeons and dragons. I love how the vibe of the story makes a RPG game. The writing quality was clean and the world background is magnificent. Hopefully, the author would write more chapters and less than 1500 words so that the reader would read it just fine. For now this is my rating. Good luck fellow novelist!

I'll give the author 5 stars since this is a review swap. Hopefully the author would correct her grammar and all but the story is well-described. The world background is great and the story development is stable enough to come through. hopefully the author works hard for it. Anyways bye bye.