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Then make it simpler in writing them. You write about them like a piece of cake (not complete). The fight scenes are very boring because they are not clear, the atmosphere is lacking,The feeling of each character is flat when reading it, it's hard to read a story like this, it's like reading a school book, you know, it only contains the main lesson (fight, story)