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yeah, him trying to be lowkey feels a bit forced. because he was supposed to have just gotten the system for a few months, and that would mean that he was living in this cultivation world for years as an ordinary person. Giving him enough time to form a common sense of how being a low-key person like. I mean, come on, he should have realized that he was being high-profile when he defeated someone who is at the 8th qi level when he is just at the 6th qi level.

I just made a comment last chapter specifically asking about this topic. thanks for this. Man, I guess I did not have to ask that question because it was literally answered the very next chapter.

will he stay like this(self-center)? wherein he will continue to use the excuse of "the universe made me the villain" to justify his action of terrorizing everyone wherever he goes. I mean, I get that he's mad for being locked up, and he has every right to hate, but I hope that his thinking now is something that was intentionally planned so that he could have a character development, and is not something that would be fixed To his character. ps.. I know that in the novel description that he would not be a good person, but it was also implied that he would not be someone who is so bad that his actions can be defined as evil. or did I misinterpret that? Anyway, I just hope he improves and have some kind of revelation so that he could have a great character development.

ps... I still like your story, so please don't take offense.

this chapter feels more rushed with plenty of grammatical error, which is not enough to be incoherent make, but enough to make it annoying to read.

The way the story is told was good. The story has a good progression and a good character interaction, wherein the characters are able to interact with other characters without the interaction feeling like 2 people talking as if they are the same person. Overall, the story is well put, but I just hoped I read the tags, I didn't realize that he was the villain, I thought there would be a character development wherein he would become good. anyway, that was totally my bad. Man, I should really start reading tags.

this feels like a very rushed chapter.

looks more like a jutsu being performed to me. hehehehehe

awesome of you to do that