MajorLove_Gravy

I read it on qq, probably one of the best fanfics you'll ever read. Very comprehensive and author does a wonderful job of making each character unique. The only downside I have is how large the harem has gotten, however the author makes it so you like them regardless. Hopefully it isn't too full for Unohana

I read to chapter 27 and then had to stop from just how stupid and cringe it was. I was willing to look past how it barely seems like the mc has, what should be, and drastic disability that's always mentioned but never has a downside except like once. But the scene where mc is laying on someone's thighs after some boss battle (which was cringe) and then falls asleep only "to have nightmares talking about how demons took everyone and everything from him" God it's so cringy I would have expected written from like a 13 year olds wattpad story with his totally badass bloodedge mc. literally cannot read further from physical pain from cringing so hard

because I don't remember naruto snapping his fingers ezpz and making gamabunta 9 tails levels of strength. Irrc author was arguing that the henge jutsu was busted because if you have enough chakra you gain the strength of what you turn into

I mean I wanted to know, I agree highschool of the dead kinda sucks.. I'm even considering dropping because of how boring I find it. He wants to grow stronger but chose like the one world where 1) he has to hide his abilities because they are supernatural 2) have baggage because he's not a piece of shit 3) have no natural way of growth. Danmachi, hell bloodborne would have been better.

it doesn't flow very well and the added space between punctuation doesn't help

don't care. she belongs to the streets

just wanna write despite it not being updated in a while. I hope author comes back and finishes it, I found this to be a great fic. I would read in the author notes of people always complaining about one thing or another but I just quite literally don't care and pretty much agree with almost everything the author did. The only thing I'd change is just have a smaller harem so that some members or even children aren't excluded for tons of chapters at a time.

doesn't really matter? at the time they made the comment it was ruined, you just fixed it. You really only proved them right

terrible pacing, constant spelling errors, and worst of all boring multiple bodies. I always hate stories where the mc has multiple bodies with different capabilities that don't share. it'd be different if everything shared but the base points but that isn't that case and that makes it boring. This fic straight up reminds me of young master Chinese fics and nothing interesting is really explored, hell the premise was supposed to be making systems but now mc makes them, takes over the body of the person who gets them, and then lives as that person for like 30 chapters while taking over other bodies, even in the most recent chapter mc makes a new body to get captured so his orginal body isn't but the new body has different abilities somehow

Does anyone know any similar stories? as while I love the premise this story is kinda ass. I hate the mc and the system is boring because it isn't random which I think would make the story much more interesting. I also don't like how weak overall the mc is and while sure he has the potential to be OP but the system is made in a way for him to only be op when the author wants him to be. Also the way the mc handled the whole nabu thing just felt... cringe? like in those Chinese cultivation novels where mc has to have people congratulate this young master for doing good and always one step ahead of everyone else without explaining himself so he can be smug