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I was so hoping this ff would be good no sudden changes but no nowadays every other author has this sudden urge to fuck up the well going ff just because they think it's good but they don't know how much a change can impact a readers viewpoint on the ongoing story
fucked up here author just because he doesn't want to grow old he choose to become and elf he has a system he can just make a ring 8n future with agelessness enchantment if he has skill for it but no the author wants instant Ramen noodles
well if he is in this much dilemma then just reject it nah its pretty simple there are 2 choices 1 elf 2 human if he really wants agelessness choose 1 if not choose 2 why the holdup
fucking price of shitty ff a mc elwho thinks with hos dick rather than brain and functions on animal based instinct of food fight and mate I don't understand the thinking of author here on what basis did he write this shit of a ff
fuck you author 😤 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😞🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
author fuck you and fuck your thinking I mean I understand that mc doesn't know much about DC but why is he not using his brain even a little or is he just stupid or is his brain functions on a 1 track mindset like he only knows 2 things food and fight 🤔 I'm dropping this fucking ff and you just wait for my review
no beo it's just authors jucked up brain through which he is fucking up the plot very well I think nowadays this type of ff is common all of these author write this type of ff where they make the mc strong but in turn make him stupid
I'm never going to read this further too many plot holes stupid mc
I'm dropping it here right now
yeah think about the alliance proposal if he is harry potter then I should say he is a slutty character here if he is thinking about the proposal instead of rejecting it right there .