HollyLevenson

without reading much? I read 30 chapters, and from what I can see, that is more rhan enough to make a review on it. On the other hand, you seem to have the delusion that your novel is holier than thou. Look at the amount of fans u have. look at how many golden tickets you have. look at how many powerstones you have. I didn't trash on your novel because I like it. I trashed on it because the common consensus is that its bad and most people have dropped it by chapter 30.

Writing quality: 2 stars At least iits readable I guess? The other is a bumbling idiot. he does not know when to zip it when it comes to describing. he repeats himself a lot and its honestly irritating especially when its coming from an author with three novels in his belt. Story development: 1 star Its bad... It's real bad... The story is slow and boring, and I could barely get through 30 chaps to make this review. The pacing reminds of watching a baby trying to walk, which is ironic since the mc seems to have been a toddler his whole life. Character Design: 1 star. Just no... mc is a baby, and all other characters are stupid. COME ONE AUTHOR! YOU'VE WRITTEN THREE BOOKS! i would give this category Zero stars if I could. Update stability: 5 stars Its good. 10 chapters a week. The problem is that despite creating so many chapters a week, its worth nothing when u write garbage. world background: 1 star The power system is atrocious. It makes no sense and its overly complicated. why use the lettering system when they can literally just say the element instead? also, the lettering system is really jumbled up. A is somehow the lowest, while D is like the second highest? what?! unique but it doesn't matter when it doesn't make sense. Overall: just bad. 2 stars don't recommend. I suggest the author drops this and starts reading novels for a change. Maybe then he will know how to make a good novel and keep it alive for longer than 15 chapters. the author deleted my last review so here is a new one.

I'm done

if only we got an explanation from this moron author

could never agree more

agreed

were you making a random list or something?! first off, why is the mana thing at the bottom? at least make it line up with all the other stats. secondly, why is the exp at the bottom?! wouldn't it make sense for it to be right below the level? maybe even right next to it? how can someone's speed be zero? that means he literally cannot move

i have no idea what ur saying, but u sound angry

true

if he chooses this I will straight up leave