Thank you to the writer for taking the time to write this story. I enjoyed reading it from start to finish! :) Overall, the story was easy to follow and started off strongly, but seemed a little choppy throughout and a little rushed towards the end (but I understand the author's notes after the chapters and her regards to school and etc.). Also, the characters were a little inconsistent even under the assumption of character development (growth and change was a little unclear, but not confusing :) ). I really enjoyed the story, I couldn't stop reading, but wished there were more descriptive in-depth elements to really draw the audience into the story. Other than that, it was a great read. Props to the author!