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So what will happen to Gwen's character development? I already mentioned it above. Even in the Spider-Verse incident, she shouldn't have been able to come to the world because of the butterfly effect. Because of Gwen, the Spider-Man team should have experienced a lot of problems and even a few deaths should have occurred. There is no experienced, responsible and guilt-stricken Spider-Gwen.

Ah May, if you only knew the life of 616 Peter. He is the most pathetic and hopeless Peter. The world always treats him like a punching bag. Thank you for the chapter, writer. I leave my 2 power stones to the chapter. This fic needs to reach more people. You did a very good job. You responded to my comment in the last chapter and you deleted it before I could respond. I didn't like that he forgave Gwen so quickly and easily. If he didn't have these abilities, he would have died. You could have prolonged this a little. I wouldn't have said anything if he forgave her after 100-200 chapters. Gwen should have made an effort or suffered some punishment in order to forgive herself. Most spider-people make many mistakes or kill people unintentionally when they first become Spider-Man or Woman. This causes them to develop as characters, but they experience a lot of guilt. The person I can give the biggest example of this is the main universe Peter. Uncle Ben caused him to become Spider-Man and taught him responsibility, but he didn't fully become a hero. The thing that turned him into a hero and gave him a sense of responsibility was George Stacy's death. The thing that gave him his current sense of guilt was Gwen's death. These two deaths affected Peter both well and badly. These are the things that turned him into the selfless hero he is now. But they are the things that made him not care about his family and loved ones. He carries a lot of guilt and responsibility and therefore can never pay much attention to his loved ones. These deaths are one of the many reasons why Peter's life is filled with pain. These were also one of the reasons for the death of Peter's 2 children with MJ. Actually, the reasons why I don't like Gwen are related to this. When Gwen first appeared in the comics, she was selfish, wild and jealous. She somehow broke this jealous shell when she dated Peter, but then she turned into a whiny, arrogant and someone who hated Spider-Man because of her father's death. I will give a short quote from the comics to explain Gwen's hatred for Spider-Man: "Oh, Peter! The only thing stronger than my love for you... is my hate for Spider-Man". According to my research, Gwen was not a very popular character when she first appeared and was not loved by the readers. Her most distinctive feature was her death. Because this death both brought the Bronze Age and provided the development of Peter's character. Anyway, we have strayed too far from the subject. Peter's death did not affect Gwen very much in this fiction. Gwen did not lose anything in this fiction. She has no sense of responsibility or guilt. Killing Peter with her own hands should have actually caused her to develop a lot. Gwen's character should now be a rebellious, slightly arrogant and wild young person. She should have a personality similar to the personality I mentioned above. Peter forgiving her so easily and quickly also sabotaged her character development. That's why I have a bit of a complaint. Also, Peter has his aunt May as an emotional pillar. In other words, he should not be so obsessed with Gwen. thanks for the chapter and you're doing great in this fic

The only thing I don't like about this fic is Peter's obsession with Gwen. I recently started reading old Spiderman comics and I didn't like Gwen at all. Gwen was really bad in Ultimate and most of the other series. Only the movie version and the Earth 65 version (Spider Gwen) are good, the others are really bad. Even the movie version was Ultimate MJ disguised as Gwen. I loved the character with the movies, but thanks to the comics, I don't like the character that much anymore. That's why I don't like Peter being so obsessed with Gwen. It's ridiculous that he can forgive someone who beat you to death with his own hands without mercy. I wanted him to at least ignore her, but he goes after her like an obsessive pervert.(Translated)

I don't think Franklin can be cloned because he will turn into a cosmic being in the future. And I don't think cosmic beings can be cloned and lastly Franklin is no longer a mutant. They retconned that incident.

Dude, this fic has nothing to do with the movies. It takes place in comics.

Fucking Marvel writers and editors are using Spider-Man as a punching bag. MJ and Peter lost 2 kids. After OMD, Spider-Man's life continued to be shit. And the biggest culprits are those fucking Spider-Man writers (headlined by son of a bitch Zeb Wells) and editors. At least Hickman is trying to fix it. New Ultimate is the best Spider-Man comic series I've read in these years. Reading this series is like drinking a cold glass of Coke on a hot summer day.

You can look at Spiderman's rogue gallery. If you are looking for a crazy people, you can find tons of them there.

Dude this fanfic references the comics. So some of the events that happened in the movies didn't happen in this fanfic. For example, if Tony Stark in the movies has a good character, Tony Stark in the comics has a shit character. his character will be shit in this fanfic.

Dude, I think you forgot that MC is a kid. I don't think he'll care much about this because he's a kid.

In comics, her moral values change depending on certain periods, and since this fic takes references from comics, there's a possibility that it's set during a period when she was morally good.