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no problem, there was no inconvenience at all. i just corrected a mistake thats all ! and keep writing!

Wow! I did not expect this story to be so wierd yet understandable! Just the fact that you are not in control of your dream gives you goosebumps! And everything happening in this story from the torture to people to dreams changing and continuing, it was executed perfectly! And it just pulls you into it, you feel like you are watching it happen as you read through! Really really good story!

I just read the two chapters and the story seems promising but one thing you should improve is the grammar as i saw a lot of grammatical error; and the chapters are a bit short. Even with these flaws the story is interesting and i will read more when you release it!.

This paragraph has a lot of grammatical error; and you should know that it's supposed to be "Why the hell does she have to live with them? the marriage has not yet happened!"

Thankyou so much! And thankyou for your suggestion, i'll try my best to make the world more immersive!.

Oh! I am just blown away! The usage of english, grammar, and words are perfectly executed and the atmosphere of the story is immersive while having that creepy yet profound background! I had to read some of the paragraphs 3 or more times just to take in what had happened!; I will surely read the chapters that are going to be released.

After reading this, I have definitely been dragged into the story and am looking forward for more, and the reason is that from the first chapter itself you are given a heartbreaking start to the series with the relationship between Emma and Emir! The surge of emotions that comes from reading this is phenomenal! And reading through, seeing how emma tries to recover , her friendship and everything was really great! There is also little to no grammar mistakes present in this story as well as really good writing and narative from the writers part; enjoyed this story a lot and i will read new chapters whenever it comes out!