Rizki_Caturianto

How old Riku really is?? I think you say that he was 6 years old before. But he 3 years old now.. So which is true?? 🤔🤔

It's a great fanfiction!! Love it!!! 😍😍 It's have a great plot/storyline and great English/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like this story, but will you left this story too?? I think you should focus write the other story first (Game Maker) until finished, before start write another story.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 👍😁😍😍

It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. I think it was so easy for MC/Lucas to get stronger.. Maybe make him still training ability he get.. Maybe you can add the dead from other anime.. There's many strong people who already dead from other animes.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍👍😍😍

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍😍 It have a good plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I like that MC/Chito is from Uzumaki Clan and so OP (he even become Hashirama and Madara teacher).. But why he always sleep/offline or not there when important scene happen (Uzushio destruction, Kushina and Minato dead, etc), he can help them and change their fate.. Although he destroy some islands who betray Uzushio, it's not enough for me, he also should have kill or crippled Hiruzen and Konoha council (Danzo and 2 others).. It's interesting to see they bulding new Konoha and others reaction about it.. I understand why MC/Chito is so passive (always stay in Uzushio/Shin Konoha and only protect it) to develop the others, but I want to see more MC fight.. Maybe MC can recruit outstanding young ninjas like Haku (is he/she still die at Wave mission? If so then ressurect him/her first), Kimimaro, Karin, etc.. Maybe recruit some from Konoha too, like Hinata, Sai, Shin (Sai brother).. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍👍😍😍

Woahhh.. It's very great Bleach fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I love that this story tell about the first Captains of Gotei 13, it's so unique and interesting.. I don't understand why MC/Araki has to sell ramen first if he join Gotei 13 later?? If it because he was weak, he can train in Seireitei.. I like his fullbring power, basically it grant him and his spouse/women immortality as long as the other still alive, I like that it can bound to many women (hope he not steal other man women).. So will it be a time skip until mayor scene/plot come later (like hollowization of some captains and vice? Rukia death sentence? Etc?).. Will he still be Captain of 11 division later?? What about Zaraki?? I want to know what happen to all first 13 Captains later.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great work author sama.. Thanks for the chapter.. Love your story 😁👍👍😍😍😍

It's a good One Piece fanfiction.. I like it!! 😍 It's have a good storyline/plot and good English/translation.. The grammar is quite good too.. I like that MC/Rei has a Gamer System.. I like that he not afraid to change the story a little (I agree that his knowledge is important, so don't change the story so much).. But it turn to bad and worse when other Strawhats is been capture by Aokiji.. I hope they save the others soon 😁👍😍😍

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it 😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I love how MC decieve Hyuga Clan and everyone else about his eyes (Tenseigan).. I love how he not afraid to change the story (Nawaki not dead, Danzo kicked from Hokage Advisor and Konoha Council, etc).. Hope he make the rest of Konoha Council a miserable lives too like Danzo.. If I can give a suggestion, get Kurenai as MC women too.. Help Karin and her mother.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. There a few times an unconsisten about character name (not MC name), but it's still okay.. I think MC/Hara is too OverPowered (OP).. He can deduce/learn something easily, that's too broken.. But I like that he's not afraid to show his power, he also change many thinks (Nawaki not death, I think Orochimaru will not defected in this story, he became a Hokage will bring many different thing for Konoha).. I'm so satisfied when I read Danzo fate and how he solve Danzo.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍

It's a great One Piece fanfiction.. One of the best I think.. I love it 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. There still few chinese translation, but it's still okay.. I like how MC/Sanders want to revenge to Celestial Dragon for his father.. He even already kill 1.. I agree with Shiryuu, the Marines and WG made monster for enemy, they should let Sanders kill 1 Celestial Dragon (who kill his father) than caught him and make him want to kill all Celestial Dragon.. I think his power is too OP.. But can Awakening his DF he derive by eat the same DF is too broken (like Float-Float Fruit).. Can't wait to see who else will join his pirate crew.. Love your story author sama.. Keepup the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍

It's a quite great One Piece fanfiction.. I like it 👍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I think it's no problem that MC/Alex recruit many girls to help her, but why recruit Nami?? She's still so small, and what about Straw Hats later?? 🤔🤔 I still like how the story progress for now, let's see next chapter 😁 Keep up the good work author san 😁👍😍😍