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Even If the universe was destroyed!! my will still be eternal... 🧘‍♂️💥

2022-01-12 UnidoGlobal
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  • ascender
    ascender4 months ago
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    If you wanT To know truly my opinion then i will say author destroyed his good story. 1st of all can you clarify us that are you writing novel pr biography? when i read i don't get the feling of reading novel i feel i am reading a biography. and every character is behaving lije a robot. even though they are showing emotion i have to say i fell you didn't get depth of a character & the story is getting rushed. power system is also have a problem you can understand by going ch 8. & technic how they work you didn't say. you didn' t use system efficiently. lastly world background? there is none . which empire? who rule what? it might have at letter ch but sorry i got bored of reading same theme. but if you solve every problem then i can say this will be a greate story..

  • ascender
    ascender4 months ago
    Postado

    First of all I will say Thank to the author for bring this amazing book to us . this novel is an absolute gem. mc is ruthless to enemy he think more logically then emotionally. this is why i like this novel so much. the power system is also unique. my only complaint is chapter update weakly only 8. i would like to have more chapter if there was 12 chapter weakly it would be best it my personal opinion.

  • ascender
    ascender4 months ago
    Comentou

    good chapter. please release more ...

  • ascender
    ascender4 months ago
    Respondeu a GrandpaPeng

    can you tell me the raw name?

  • ascender
    ascender4 months ago
    Comentou

    i agree with your word. please continue this way... don't be influenced by other. your story is going a perfect direction...

  • ascender
    ascender5 months ago
    Respondeu a HotIce

    here you are using twisted logic why can't a mc become smart if he did'nt study. in real world THERE was a lot of example an uneducated people can be a smart. smartness can be gain by telent or experience.

  • ascender
    ascender5 months ago
    Comentou

    great chapter. even though at first i got irritated that he don't know what his body can handle but letter i understand that mc was never smart otherwise he would'nt have been Bullied... so now is time for him lern from mistake & become monster with smart brain that can scheme other

  • ascender
    ascender5 months ago
    Postado

    I have to say it is a gem. A true gem i have read 45+ ch so far & it really good. i just hope mc can keep evolove in most perfect way.. author please continue this novel you have huge potential...

  • ascender
    ascender5 months ago
    Respondeu a Astral_Pandemonium

    author you don't need to be forced some thing can't be forced go with the pace or theme that you create. if harem add in this serious type novel it will affect on story. if you need add then add a fatefull person for mc who will grow with equal pace & do not hinder the path of each other. even though i didn't read this but i will now. see if it can entertaine me... 😇

  • ascender
    ascender5 months ago
    Postado

    This Is My true feeling for this novel. can you Imagine where a mc have a choice but author force him to show off. he has power to evolove everything . first author said mc should cautious about showing his power then he show it off in front of public and made some bullshits resoning and no one suspect him? i lost my interest at 15 chapter . and he has physical telent but he did'nt leran any skill. i can get he can get 1 free at first but there is a quest like you said if he can go to npc when they know your telent they will surely teach you. lastly what i like is power system it 's game like but at least has some upgrade power system. if author Didn't force mc & let the novel go with natural flow it would best novel in game genre.. author should learn more about the meaning of cautious.