Inori_Murasaki
" To Write is to Understand one's Work as an Author, Don't Tarnish the Work of a Man who Writes "
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Inori_Murasaki4 months agoRespondeu a King_Of_ChoasLast thing, You put to much time-skips like (5) years later and at the end (3) Years later, you should only reserve that for like training arcs or something related or similar to those.
- Inori_Murasaki4 months agoPostado
Overall it being your first work is understandable. The Little bits of Information before the start of the chapter was Good touch as it allowed us readers to understand it a little bit. But the chapter seemed to be a little bit to short and overall the tone was a bit rushed and just the atmosphere was little different with the characters reactions being bit bland and not expressed to well, but overall it decent for a new author, Welcome to World of Web-Novels!
- Inori_Murasaki2 years agoPostado
Not going lie I was looking for another novel but I found this one it was 10/10 It now one of my top 5 fav novel keep it up! ........