Worldofimagination

Autor parou de escrever? Ficou bom po, quem é brazuca entende claramente toda a rima e até consegue imaginar a cena, fez algumas referências muito boas

Definitivamente não, mas o autor fez algumas alterações no final de cada rima pra encaixar, não sei se deu certo, mas para a tradução PT ficou boa

But I’ve already explained it, it’s literally in the synopsis, and in the first and second chapters. Raj received memories from a guy named David, and the two souls merged with Raj being the dominant one. I don’t understand why the review is low for something I’ve explained so many times, but alright 👍🏻.

It turned out really good, man. I’ll definitely use it, I’m glad you liked it

Damn, when I was writing, I thought of that too haha! But I’ll make the Raj x Missy dialogue better. So there won’t be any regrets.

I wasn’t going to do a review of the book, but I had nothing else to do… it’s good because I can already share some curiosities about the book with you. 1- I opened a poll to decide who would be the FML of the book, and most people chose Missy Cooper, so it’ll be her. I’ll try to create a good relationship between the two; I’m confident about the dynamics, I have lots of ideas. 2- Raj’s personality will be improved in this fanfic, but he’ll still be the same funny Raj from the series because, after all, we like him for his personality. 3- For now, there won’t be too many OCs, but I created a few, and they will be important at a certain point. 4- This fanfic is completely a product of my mind. I only use AI to help provide some of Sheldon’s dialogues since I’m not smart enough to come up with those on my own. So you won’t see typical phrases like “With a determined look” or anything like that, but you will read some repeated lines, as I’m just a humble amateur author… 5- Chapter updates will happen almost every day; it’s rare for me to go three days without publishing something. 6- At the end of each chapter, I hope you’ve at least had a laugh. After all, I’m writing a comedy fanfic. This is all purely for fun, the chapters will be free, and there won’t be a Patreon. If you want to support the author, just leave a positive comment, and I’ll already be happy.

Man, have you ever heard the saying ‘Don’t suffer in advance’? You didn’t even let me finish writing about Jake, Tommy, and Mike, and you’re already saying it’s bad. When I talk about action, I’m not referring to shooting, fighting, gangs, or cops… I’m talking about broadening horizons and exploring things, not just staying in the apartment. Have you ever thought about reading 200 episodes of a fanfic where the setting is always an apartment? At some point, it’s going to get boring, so I added the OCs, and as I’ve said, they were created for a purpose, which I’ve already mentioned in one of the chapters. If I wrote the fanfic based on what my readers wanted, I’d have tags like Harem, Ecchi, R18, Villain, etc… You get the logic? The point isn’t what you all want, it’s what I’m going to do. And the fanfic will continue in the same way. I’m sorry it wasn’t to your liking, but not even Jesus pleased everyone, so imagine me, a mere author.

Lalita

I understand where you're coming from. But like I said from the beginning, the fanfic isn't about Raj and the “friends,” each character will have their own part and individual scenes. And I do think I've written a lot of the dialogue and events around Raj. The last few chapters especially were literally all about Raj, and the chapters with the “idiot bikers” will serve to break away a bit from the original plot, and bring in some action (you’ll thank me for that later on). As for the girls, dude, we’re still at the beginning of the fanfic. If you watched the original series, you’d know that in the next chapter, a childhood friend of Raj would appear, and Missy Cooper (FML) shows up around episode 15 of the original. (We're on episode 8). That's why I didn’t add more female characters at the start, because from here on out it’s literally going to be all about that... You guys are stressing me out, seriously.

Most of it is written by me, it’s just Sheldon’s jokes where I need to add something smarter, so I use AI. But even then, I have to delete and rewrite a lot of things, because AI can be pretty stupid sometimes. Anyone who thinks you can write everything with AI is seriously mistaken. And I’m glad you’re enjoying it.