random_Scribbler

So far, it's Good. I'd recommend author working a bit more on his wording, and leavings details vague. I know a fair bit of people reading fanfictions have nothing but rudimentary knowledge of the original fiction, so it would be better to add in a bit more details. Not so much as to make the details redundant, but to make the story a bit more accessible to readers. Then again, given the narrative I'd assume the story would shed light into the details as the story progresses. Holy Mother of God, why is the post button not lighting up? is this not enough words? Welp never mind, it was because I didn't give a rating to the translation quality. In my defense, It's not a translation, So, why should I? Or is IT?!!

and yet these simple ramblings gave so much depth to his character, motivation, worldview etc... So, compared to all the brain rot that accumulate in Webnovel everyday, I'll give this chapter a solid 9/10

red-skinned man. a mystery character for now. add one more eye in your imagination and you're set

yep

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Ciel was originally an AI, who had access to anything digital on their Earth, think about what an Ai could do if it had access to internet. Hint: Ultron

why would you think that?

lore is coming my guy, I'll try to balance things out as much as possible...

more like Tao want him experience school life, socialize and make friends

He's not a villain per se. just someone forced by circumstances and... the author.