primal_vampire

sure

hey will you not update your stories any more

you have no idea what will be happening

thanks for changing it when you had written 30*10 i thought 30×10

i donot understand how this works

after seeing your comment I read all 34 chapters still this story gives ntr vibes and even other authors who write story for first time have better novels your mc gives the feelings of beta cuck male and you say story and character development this is a joke you have worst story and character development and you think all asian husband should be a obident dog for their wife so that she can use that characteristics to just ntr their husband this is 21st century in today's time most of the people only want satisfaction either you are sheltered person or a kid who has never dated or stepped into society

the story is good I like it but the mc gives me the feeling of cuck and sissy eg in the starting when system and Yui were flirting he was not saying any thing to them this novel doesn't give me a feeling of comedy it gives me a feeling of ntr even when his second wife was saying thing like torture him he was doing nothing