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EveStar_Origin

EveStar_Origin

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2021-12-06 UnidoMalaysia
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Escrita

255h

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355

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Emblemas

10

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483
  • EveStar_Origin
    EveStar_Origin5d
    Respondeu a EveStar_Origin

    i meant 5 stages

    Essence Refining to Qi Transformation, Refining Qi to Spirit Transmutation, Refining Spirit to Return to Void, and Refining Void to Tao Harmony are the Four Steps of Immortality Ascension inherited from ancient Qi cultivators.
    Transmigrating over ten thousand years late, I was forced to become a mighty presence
    Oriental · Not falling fish
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Respondeu a Dark_night1

    haha be warn that as the you reaching 200 mark, you would need a bit of patience. you'll notice the irksome and annoyance of having an mc like su xing. but on the bright side, the story inside the simulation was great imo.

    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Respondeu a EveStar_Origin

    just to add. essentially the mc himself didn't do anything in the story. he was a shut in, refinding alchemy every day, when out on lunch date every weekend, and watch (mind you not play but watch) text simulation every week and suddenly he gotten stronger. the engaging part was the simulation. it was portrayed he was someone who does great things in the simulation. while technically, it was just the system who simulated his future based on current world situation and his decision. like playing games and time skipping development in annual interval. so the plot had not even progressed even after a year he got the system. yet somehow su xing was under the impression he was a savior meant to change the blue star's fated demise.

    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Respondeu a 4eyedSloth

    nah. i doubt he would destroy the plane even in other novel. it's not like he promote to nascent realm or body cultivation of equivalent realm. i mean he is just improving his body and skin right?

    Su Xing gently exhaled a breath of foul air and carefully felt the changes in his body.
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Postado

    The story by itself was good. and the simulations and whatnot is engaging. but somehow author was bad in executing and incorporating the modern element, the dungeon, and the cultivation. as a person who live in world with dungeon (even though he was indeed transmigrated) he don't even know how others players promote from bronze to silver and so on until several simulations. even if as cultivator he does not need to do this, he should not be that clueless right? and despite being modern world with all technological advantage, when he went to scripture pavilion, why on earth he need to memorize? he could just use video/image recording. even if there's restriction, they should have some props to record. and even if nothing can be taken out of said dungeon beside memories, he could always ask his master or the library elders to imprint the knowledge needed directly to the brain (like 3 occassion where they just point to his forehead and he gains said skill). i mean the identity is there. plus, even if he can't take anything out, since he can touch everything in that cultivation dungeon, this mean he can actually consume pills. it is a plothole. but author somehow didn't notice it. and for god's sake, he is a college student, not some high school underage boy. why does author shied away to talk about seggs and relationship? mc always act coy and avoid it with. lastly he never take his interpersonal relationship with others seriously and only used them. he didn't even care about what happen to them. a tragedy could be avoided if he just took notice in the simulation and prevent it in real life and yet he didn't even feel anything after learning the knews the friend's (gf in the simulation) parents died.

    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Respondeu a Nero_GodOPokerCats

    it was only mentioned 1 billion during the first time. in the second time and current chapter it was 10billion. so maybe the original intention of author was 10 billion and the translation make a mistake

    Su Xing took it eagerly. He knew the value of this Shennong Spiritual Nurturing Technique was worth ten billion points of energy! To think he had now obtained it in the real world without spending any energy at all when he didn't know how long it would have taken him to save up enough to bring it back from the simulator.
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Respondeu a VardorStormDragon

    i don't think it meant embarrassing as in humiliating or ashamed. but it is more akin towards awkward situations or appal or distress kinda thing

    Fortunately, Spirit Grains did not require fertilizer; otherwise, Su Xing would have had to teach her how to apply manure… that would have been too embarrassing!
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Comentou

    so he didn't discharge any 'impurities' like other novels? lol

    Su Xing gently exhaled a breath of foul air and carefully felt the changes in his body.
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Comentou

    wait....what? golden core to get started to become disciple? does that mean even nascent realm would still just a inner disciple equivalent? how high is the old man's realm? mahayana? or human immortal?

    [The old man sighed and said that while your talent was decent, your Cultivation Level was too low. Had you been a Golden Core Stage Cultivator, he might have considered taking you as a disciple.]
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Respondeu a Tahiryo

    he can't. this time it's almost mandatory to get the talent or else he would miss the chance when entering the dungeon. thankfully he still got one more simulation

    [After hearing this, the elder shook his head slightly, saying that you didn't complete his task and that you had started too late in the Cultivation years, missing the prime age for pursuing the path of Immortal Cultivation.]
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Comentou

    hmm if it was me i would probably go with the talent unless there's going to be better one in the future. this way he could go both body and qi cultivation

    Because as long as he refrained from using them, Su Xing's initial number of Spirit Stones in each simulation would be forty!
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Respondeu a Sabon

    no..i mean..are u sure not...she wouldn't be that direct right?...or something implied between the lines happened lol

    [You took her virginity and were entangled with her for several months.]
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Comentou

    a true male friend. i think it is rare for a guy to remember his male friends' birthday without anyone reminding it. remembering details like dates mostly girl things

    "Uh, actually, I wanted to ask... when is your birthday again?"
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
    EveStar_Origin10d
    Comentou

    i guess he was rather well off even during school. not even batting an eye giving away such card is saying something about his background, their friendship and his trust to mc

    Yu Yan nodded and took out a bank card from his wallet, handing it to Su Xing and saying,
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Respondeu a GloriousMornings

    haha i bet she would

    If she was mentally prepared, then perhaps she wouldn't have been so scared. However, the person that Xu Zixin thought was a survivor was actually a bloody, murderous zombie! This shock was bound to scare her, no matter how calm and collected she was!
    Black Tech Internet Cafe System
    Oriental · The Leaf That Goes Against Water
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Respondeu a TheGodlyFateFox

    probably chicken soup talk? not sure what author meant. but it certainly not sx

    [The next day, she left, and there were spots of blood on the bedsheet.]
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Respondeu a Nero_GodOPokerCats

    indeed. it is a masterstroke skill to have for simulation. you may even obtain crucial info after death giving him more chance to prepare

    "Ding, you have chosen to bring back the talent of Dying With One's Eyes Open from the simulation, consuming 1000 energy points, leaving a balance of 782 points."
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Comentou

    owh I'm surprised that it was really just spiritual salvation session before.

    [The next day, she left, and there were spots of blood on the bedsheet.]
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Respondeu a Chained001

    not sure whether you are just being sarcastic or just new to wuxia webnovel.

    "Damn, and here I thought I, as a transmigrator, had no golden finger!"
    Others Level Up, but I Pursue Cultivation!
    Oriental · Three five mysterious seven
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  • EveStar_Origin
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    Respondeu a finnegun

    maybe in that world, whenever they speak they don't actually think with their brain...get it? lol

    "You don't have to shout it out loud. Just think about it or silently read it in your mind. Everything in the game is transmitted via brain waves, which are ten thousand times more advanced than sound control!" the system voice replied.
    I have an Apocalypse City
    Jogos · Hair fell out
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