Because the Adults are considered to be different from the infants. Race doesn't refer to skin color here, but rather their makeup. An infant ripjaw would evolve into an adolescent ripjaw, and an adolescent into an adult.

yeah, the rewrite is different. The rewrite will be the canon information once I actually get to doing it all

He would be a plate fried chicken tenders, french fries, and a full gallon of sweet tea.

you know I gotta do it to you <3

I'm the Author and I think I'm doing pretty okay! Not perfect of course, my update rate is dogshit, but I'm doing my best!

Quite similar to this, yes.

If you're hungry for more content you should try reading the prequel, Gorum The Unstoppable. it's much better written and the chapters have a pretty consistent length. Also thanks for reading <3

Glad I'm doing good lol! thanks for reading!

Not yet, but I'm thinking about making one.

Don't usually read BL, or romance, but the story was interesting enough to captivate me for a good while. The only issue that cropped up was grammatical errors/clunky formation of sentences.

It's a solid story, the only issues were pacing and the not super solid english, but it improves in later chapters. Overall, I think it's really good other than the weird pacing.

Congratulations! I'm more than happy to keep reading and give stones, your novel even got me to write my own. And it's working out! You've been an amazing inspiration, have pride in that and everything else you've done.

His final form will be bonkers.

Truly Sigma

I'm happy you read all the way through and actually liked it! I was a little worried I was switching perspectives too much

Thank you, I always thought it wass weird that depsite muscle power overall increasing, that their speed doesn't. I get being bigger usually means slower, however that's the case for tubby folk. For actually muscle mountains who distribute their workout properly, they basically become bullet trains, running off hardcore momentum. That said, in context if the story, if your dexterity is too low, it could actually cause you to be slower. Since it doesn't matter how good yoyr muscles are if you can't properly control your own body

It's a very interesting concept, I was worried it would be a squid game clome at first, but it got way more interesting, and quick. I think the memory loss is a great plot point, and The Watcher is an intimidating antagonist. The only nitpick I have is the lack of use of punctuation, which causes alot of run on scentences and makes it hard to recognize inflection.

The protagonist has a sort of melancholy confidence that I like, the fact that the protagonist has knowledge about fantasy worlds and such prior to being sent in is nice. So I can assume the stupid decisions will be less a of a factor due to experience. No complaints at all actually, the writing is very eloquent aswell so it's extra pleasing to read.

From the first chapter, it's pretty interesting. And chapter length was suprising, it was refreshing to have a first chapter with a good length and no grammatical errors. The story is...intriguing, to say the least. Definitely makes me wonder whats happening next, would definitely consider continuing reading.

From reading the first chapter, its a bit difficult for me because the protagonist is female and its natural hard for me to relate to a female protagonist as I'm a man, however it presented a good amount of info just in the first chapter, and held and interesting cliffhanger. Not my particular cup of tea, but I think it's still good. The only issue is the grammatical errors, but its understandable if english is not the Author's first language