Patricia_Levy
I love to read and write! All my book covers are pictures from the internet that I mash together to create something new and unique to fit my liking. Check out some other stories on Wattpad!!
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Wow… This story started out normal then I got whiplash. Not bad, but wow… I really like the story of Simonand Periphae. It was very detailed and well done. I also like the characters. While Julianna seems to easily switch moods as much as her sister Lucy, she seems cool. Eric is very soft for someone who’s had a violent life. I’m hoping to see him become stronger in the chapters to come. Keep up the good work, Author!
This is the first book on WEBNOVEL I have ever finished. Which is saying something. Author, wonder story. You have given another version to the werewolf culture that I simply LOVE. I loved Tori and her feisty nature. I love that you kept her personality the same even to the end. I love Xavier and his need to protect her no matter what. I love the story behind everything that has happened to both of them. Truly, a wonderful story. I do reccomend going back and editing. You have a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Other than that, beautiful work.
First, I love the tradition the kids had. It’s sweet and shows a lot about them. Second, I like Nathan’s character. He seems to be a mostly confident man but is actually shy. It’s cute! The author does a really good job at writing and making things unique. I’ve only read the first chapter, and I feel it should have been longer. But that’a just my opinion. Great job!
You have a huge run-on sentence. Try to break it up a little
I like Ander! He’ got dry humor. But I worry for hims
I love this! I’ve read one other book so far like this, but they differ in amazing ways possible! Shane is an arrogant, cocky boy who dies and now must navigate this in between world. He has a big heart though, as he saves both Frank and Tess. He also has this dark cosmic power that makes everyone around him afraid of him. Though, I don’t see him being a real threat. He seems to be aware of everything he does and doesn’t truly want to do harm to anyone as long as they don’t do harm to him or his sister. I’m intrigued.
Add ‘it’ after why.
You have written ‘one’ three times in a row…?