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Nice book! Keep up the good work author!
Nice book. Keep up the good work author
this is an awesome vrmmorpg novel ive read in here! one of my fav so far! i love everything about t! five stars for me! couldn't wait to read more!
wrting quality - good to no grmatcal errors story development - just the right pace. all were explained and nothing rush character design - all characters r fleshed out. the only thing that gets me is the mc's desinterest and boredom to vrything except women. he killed himself from being a god to escape eternal boredom but still ends up bored in the lower planes. lol😂 update stability - too early to tell but form WN views, the update s rather slow. i guess its to make up for the quality of writing 👍 world background - nothing much to say at this point and vrything was explained. its a good take of a rebirth cultivation trope and a must read for those who love the genre 👍
the first thing i notice when i read this is the quality of writing 😍 its soo good. beeing in WN this is a refreshing read 😂 most novels here r in quantity than quality of writing that i almost forgot what it felt like reading descriptive words with correct gramars and such 😌 i have nothing else to say. evrything is perfect. keep up the good work 😊
writing quality - good and readable though there r few mistakes but nothing serious story development - pacing is good though abrupt. needs more explaining character design - too early to tell update stability - need more chapters world backgroud - need to describe the world a bit more. if you're aiming for a medieval warfare then this book, i assume, needs a lot of geopolitical descriptions or something 😂 i hope this story wont solve vrything with magic all in all, a good read and the only major downside is the abruptness and unnatural character dialogues dnt stop writting 👍
Funny and awesome! Most systems i read r dark, serious, heavy and super awkward. i thought this would be too but i was greatly surprised thats its funny and the Mc being focre by a system to be a villain is a unique plot i didnt hope id enjoy. ill be waiting for more! ❤
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i love the story and evey charcaters! chapters r short but it allowed me to digest t with ease. i hope all novels r chapter short so its easier to digest one of my favorites! i cant wait to read more!
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