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Lover_of_Fantasy

Lover_of_Fantasy

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2021-11-28 UnidoGlobal
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  • Lover_of_Fantasy
    Lover_of_Fantasya month ago
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    Nice book! Keep up the good work author!

  • Lover_of_Fantasy
    Lover_of_Fantasya month ago
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    Nice book. Keep up the good work author

  • Lover_of_Fantasy
    Lover_of_Fantasy3 years ago
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    this is an awesome vrmmorpg novel ive read in here! one of my fav so far! i love everything about t! five stars for me! couldn't wait to read more!

  • Lover_of_Fantasy
    Lover_of_Fantasy3 years ago
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    wrting quality - good to no grmatcal errors story development - just the right pace. all were explained and nothing rush character design - all characters r fleshed out. the only thing that gets me is the mc's desinterest and boredom to vrything except women. he killed himself from being a god to escape eternal boredom but still ends up bored in the lower planes. lol😂 update stability - too early to tell but form WN views, the update s rather slow. i guess its to make up for the quality of writing 👍 world background - nothing much to say at this point and vrything was explained. its a good take of a rebirth cultivation trope and a must read for those who love the genre 👍

  • Lover_of_Fantasy
    Lover_of_Fantasy3 years ago
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    the first thing i notice when i read this is the quality of writing 😍 its soo good. beeing in WN this is a refreshing read 😂 most novels here r in quantity than quality of writing that i almost forgot what it felt like reading descriptive words with correct gramars and such 😌 i have nothing else to say. evrything is perfect. keep up the good work 😊

  • Lover_of_Fantasy
    Lover_of_Fantasy3 years ago
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    writing quality - good and readable though there r few mistakes but nothing serious story development - pacing is good though abrupt. needs more explaining character design - too early to tell update stability - need more chapters world backgroud - need to describe the world a bit more. if you're aiming for a medieval warfare then this book, i assume, needs a lot of geopolitical descriptions or something 😂 i hope this story wont solve vrything with magic all in all, a good read and the only major downside is the abruptness and unnatural character dialogues dnt stop writting 👍

  • Lover_of_Fantasy
    Lover_of_Fantasy3 years ago
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    Funny and awesome! Most systems i read r dark, serious, heavy and super awkward. i thought this would be too but i was greatly surprised thats its funny and the Mc being focre by a system to be a villain is a unique plot i didnt hope id enjoy. ill be waiting for more! ❤

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    Lover_of_Fantasy3 years ago
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  • Lover_of_Fantasy
    Lover_of_Fantasy3 years ago
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    i love the story and evey charcaters! chapters r short but it allowed me to digest t with ease. i hope all novels r chapter short so its easier to digest one of my favorites! i cant wait to read more!