Krystal_bby
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I have read all of this author's books and this one is special it's not better than the others well not yet at least but with the pasting and the story it will be I love the fights and the mystery about the WMC I'm so excited for more chapters keep up the good work.[img=update][img=recommend][img=coins]
Great first chapter i could see the improvements that you have made to your writing style.this is one of the best chapter you have made so far this goes for The Phoenix Slayers too when i was reading it is like i could feel Shiki's pain even tho he doesn't show it I love the ending and i'm looking forward for the next chpters but just letting you know i'm a big cory fan so shiki could never be cory[img=coins]
i love the first chapter so far....the plot and summary is interesting so far. i like the fact that Imani will have a another mission other than the one thats in the summary. great job for your first chapter i wish you never had split it into two parts but great job i give you 5/10 I'm looking forward on all the another chapters and also your in improvement.