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I tried to read this book but it became too much for me this book isn’t even about mc himself.. that oc girl is like tail of the mc every single chapter you describe every move of the mc with her, like they went to sleep they trained together bla bla. There is no character development at all. not worth it
Extremely slow updates, no wonder your fic lost peoples interest
This doesn’t make any sense, this chapter is clearly written in chat gpt. It is such a shame that this story has ruined…