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Snoring_rabbit

Lv12

Am always thinking too much and I finally found a way to control it Writing!!! So here I am. Please be nice.

2021-11-18 UnidoGlobal
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit11mth
    Comentou

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 CH1 - The Escape
    In Nica's Shadow
    Fantasia · DerekJPerna
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Comentou

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Blood on her hands.
    Dragon King's Quest:Saving his fragmented mate
    Fantasia · Marcel_Mercy
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Postado

    Okay so I had to leave at chapter eight and come leave a review. This book is fire considering the fact its new. There are little to no mistakes, well described which makes you live through what the characters in the book is going through, definitely a must read[img=update]

    Beyond the Original : The God Particle Experiment
    Ficção Científica · LegecyLegend
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Comentou

    There seems to be a mistake with the 'making'

    As he enters the metal door, the sound of heated arguments and the rustling of papers fill the air, making him a headache from the noise. The room is dimly lit, with only a few flickering fluorescent lights providing illumination. The air is thick with the acrid smell of sweat and cigarette smoke, making it difficult to breathe. Officer Steven feels a headache coming on, he walks into the washroom and finds a man injecting something into his body.
    Beyond the Original : The God Particle Experiment
    Ficção Científica · LegecyLegend
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Comentou

    Nice intro.[img=strong]

    Ch 4 "Alliances and Deals: The Family Politics of the Solar Cluster"
    Beyond the Original : The God Particle Experiment
    Ficção Científica · LegecyLegend
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Comentou

    This second chap is even better than the first[img=faceslap]

    Ch 2 "The Unintended Experiment - 02"
    Beyond the Original : The God Particle Experiment
    Ficção Científica · LegecyLegend
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Comentou

    This second chap is even better than the first[img=faceslap]

    Ch 2 "The Unintended Experiment - 02"
    Beyond the Original : The God Particle Experiment
    Ficção Científica · LegecyLegend
    detail
  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Comentou

    This second chap is even better than the first[img=faceslap]

    Ch 2 "The Unintended Experiment - 02"
    Beyond the Original : The God Particle Experiment
    Ficção Científica · LegecyLegend
    detail
  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Comentou

    There is a mistake in this paragraph

    Este número foi suprimido.
    Beyond the Original : The God Particle Experiment
    Ficção Científica · LegecyLegend
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Comentou

    Sounds like something that might probably happen in the nearest future.

    You can barely recognize these worlds anymore. Yeah, "worlds" is plural. Humanity has reached an extent that they are already regressing back to its colonial mindset.
    Beyond the Original : The God Particle Experiment
    Ficção Científica · LegecyLegend
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Comentou

    Catchy prologue. Good job author[img=strong]

    Ch 1 "Prologue"
    Beyond the Original : The God Particle Experiment
    Ficção Científica · LegecyLegend
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Respondeu a OldNispy

    Thank you

    Goddess to our world
    Fantasia · Snoring_rabbit
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Postado

    The writing style is not bad, but there need to be changes with the capital wording apart from that the story seems good.

    Extraordinary Teens
    Fantasia · The_flame_prinz
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Postado

    What I noticed when reading the first two chaps of this book is the lack of short paragraphs aside from that it's all good

    This book is trash, don't read
    Anime e quadrinhos · Hind_Sight
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Postado

    Chapter length is okay, starting is intriguing and the grammar is okay. I am no pro but I think it's a good book.

    The Fallen Punisher
    Fantasia · WritingLegion
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Respondeu a DreamScribbler

    [img=recommend]

    Dragon King's Quest:Saving his fragmented mate
    Fantasia · Marcel_Mercy
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Postado

    Fell in love with the first chap! definitely adding to libary!!!

    Diabolic Occult Of The Forsaken
    Fantasia · eudine
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Respondeu a JJ_Francis

    Thanks.

    Goddess to our world
    Fantasia · Snoring_rabbit
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Respondeu a Salad_Adressing

    Thanks [img=recommend]

    Goddess to our world
    Fantasia · Snoring_rabbit
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  • Snoring_rabbit
    Snoring_rabbit1yr
    Respondeu a Salad_Adressing

    Thanks [img=recommend]

    Goddess to our world
    Fantasia · Snoring_rabbit
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