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So before I delete this novel from my library purely because I do not want to see the cover again I wanted to tell you to delete that cover because it is horrible, atrocious, I mean if I saw that cover on my first time using Webnovel I would delete the app it looks like it’s made for children delete it
Thanks I am new to writing after chapter everything improves and I wouldn’t mond u pointing out mistakes I have hand wrote everything I am Africa American so it’s not machine trans I already got an editor to edit my first 47 chapters besides 3&4 so they should be resolved and I have long since improved on my grammer and punc but if I missed something I would greatly acept a small chap commwnt that can help me improve this novel Thanks for the review
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Ight so this story is bad don’t waste your time everything is written like a funny parody without the funny the mc lived for five years saving money so he could activate the system but as soon as he activated it he instantly became a wasteful idiot. I had high hopes but all I received was endless cringe and dumb characters
Hello dear readers I will not be saying anything about the novel everything will unfold eventually all I will give you is that No stupid characters And no Chinese type writing with face slapping and such That’s all I will give you that rest can be seen in the novel
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