Novel_Surge

how long does he hide his powers

its becoming boring

i was honestly enjoying this story but stopped at chapter 167. Its becoming a complete trash. If you want to make him overpowered so early, why don't you directly give him all the elements from the beginning. You gave him even the darkness and that too darkness l, which was Lira's. MC's is like a spoiled baby always crying betrayal, but when it was his own turn, he too betrayed lira when she was so good too him.

maybe you should try original scripts instead of just stealing others's work.

I don't understand one thing. Why sabotage marvel and DC when you have such a successful franchise and universe yourself. What's more marvel and dc will only start in late 2000s. Even if its fiction, Marvel and Dc are more than just a fiction, they are emotion. By the time they would've released, Kazir could already have much more success and maybe the fiction would end before that timeline.

I think there's no need to dirty kazir's mother that much. she was also a victim of the past, and as you explained earlier, she seems to be a mental patient. I am not saying to completely whitewash her, but wouldn't it be okay to just treat her or send her to mental hospital instead of dirtying. This can also play a good role in healing Kazir's phobia

there is a suggestion, Can't you make story go fast paced and make director end up with Scarlet, or even Angelina is good

please make mc end up with Angelina Jolie. I love her so much.

I changed the age, you can check now.

okay. Anyway, I was just thinking. Twilight will not be included.