Diamond_Shatterer
Please allow me to try breaking your minds with my mind blowing stories!!!!
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I am wowed by the planning and effort put into the novel. The concept is unique and eye-catching, I am sure the story is going to become a hit. Best of luck for the future and keep uploading chapters. ( A personal msg - I am also an aspiring writer and after reading your novel, I feel like discussing with you about story writing. I wonder if that's possible.)
intriguing story and engrossing conversation. The siblings have a cute and a very strong bond . I was able to enjoy the free style of writing the novel has been written. Its just there is no description about the world the novel is taking place, leaving empty holes about the way it works. Overall I enjoyed reading it. Continue the good work and best of luck for future.
Awesome, Interesting and Captivating The story is interesting from the start and it keeps getting better as it progresses. The content and idea of the author is superb. Just one suggestion: Use paragraphing in a better way to make the novel even better. I loved the novel and pls continue uploading new chapters. Best of luck for the future author.
I was captivated by the prologue because of the way the story had been written. The writing is very descriptive making me form a clear image of that particular scenario and conveys to me what the author is trying to tell their audience. Its a vey interesting book I will keep reading. Best of luck for the future!!!