Lingyun_Xie

The next realms are Black Hole, Quasar, Galaxy, Entity, Sage, Great Sage, Monarch, Paragon, Universal, Universal Filaments, Cosmic, Cosmic Filaments/Firmaments of Ascendancy, Reality

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Are those names for the future, or just nicknames rn?

Even though I kinda shipped Quinn and Layla, it's sad that Helen is gone. Maybe I should convert to honor her memory. It's really hard to imagine the Cursed Faction without her.

I don't think 'god' is too strictly defined. In Christianity, God technically cannot die, but there are different gods. Like in greek and roman mythology ,gods can get injured and put into a death-like state where they're technically alive, but more like dead. In Chinese mythology, the first god died. In Egyptian mythology, gods die all the time. Other mythologies may have gods that are pretty much like over-powered mortals. 'God' is not strictly defined, so in Killerhemboy's story, a god could die. It's fiction as well, so just chill. Besides, if you read World Domination System, Daneel is pretty much like a god to the citizens of Angaria. (When is he going to become as overpowered as before? :C)

I feel like it's very slow paced at the beginning especially compared to Daneel's progress in World Domination System. It's sad to see his beyond Peak Hero skills go to waste. As a slave he has to escape, find Faxul, Elanex, Eloise, and Xuan (does he have to court his wives again?), unlock their memories after his assuming he can even recognize them, find the sunken Angaria where he could find his original body, rise to the level of Saints, take over the Mainland, then revive everyone that has died in Angaria. Given the slow pace that the chapters have been posting and the MC is progressing, I really hope that the author can quicken up the pace.

I was really sad since he's going to grow his powers back, find the sunken Angaria, and Elanev, Faxul, Eloise, and Xuan. Yipee. I really do not feel like waiting 5 years for this story to finish.

I don't really think that this is a good way to review. I think it was a great story and MC was one of the best I've read. Mana was Kretos's strong suit and he might've relied on it too much. As mentioned, the Strongest Mortal Soul was relatively weak at the moment, but it still took a Mana-nulling pill and the strength of the strongest of all the races combined to take him down. As the author mentioned, he was also tired and wanted to get this over with. In regards to your other parts, I've tried to write my own story and it's pretty hard. To create such a masterpiece that you've worked so long and hard for would hurt a lot if someone disliked it and spit on it. I'm sure a lot of people including my friends would want to read this story. If you didn't like the story, you should've just moved onto something else instead of staying and venting out your anger.

I think it's a great story. I love those kinds of stories where the MC is overwhelmingly powerful. Several times, I could almost feel like my blood was boiling like Ren himself. There were several grammatical mistakes and I wish it could be updated faster as it's a great story.

Ok, so they can still create more Dalki. That's bad.