Magic_writer

This is my 1st novel and I lack experience, so I would like the readers to be patient about the mistakes I do and support my work. I will develop my writing style over time. Thank you

The quality of the writing is amazing except for some small grammatical errors. The development of the story is great if you ask me ( I can't say any as I don't want to reveal spoilers ). A especially loved the heroine's character as she wants to keep her private life private, even though I feel like she is a bit arrogant but I guess it also adds a kind of charm The author is working on 2 other novels other than this so I guess the publishing stability will decrease by a bit The novel is mostly based on characters but I guess the author should give a little thought to the world background.

Well, it was a great twist and I have to accept I was surprised

was waiting for this chapter

yeah, I did but who is she

Waiting for an upcoming chapter please 🙏 publish soon

I guess it's pieces

Thanks for the feedback I will check my mistakes and update those chapters😁

this novel is a bit slow at at the start but after chapter 9 it got better it's because the mc of the story got chance to redo her life overall good story

I will take a break tomorrow and start a new volume from day after