SchizoReader

This is the first time since I use WebNovel that i read a writing that deserve a five star. Good use of punctuation, hidden gem beneath the pile of papers.

Alright! The story is good, I don't think the grammatical error is a big deal since the author isn't a native speaker. Keep doing what you are doing.

Quite interesting story tbh. maybe you should check it, or must check it! The writing is quite... good. Keep writing dude, hope people read this gem.

Remove the "ROAR".

This is supposed to be her. I try to do my best

you know, i did try to make this as an interactive story game (but i stopped). you actually can see the state of my mind.

Why are you laughing at such name? Insulting the native name from the people of china!? I swear i will crush you down if i ever see you. Don't ever laugh at china again!!

It's actually a good novel. Nice writing, some words probably need to be latinized. I don't know anything about chinese words, so it'll be helpful for you to write the latinized words too. Development is actually crazy. It went from 0-10 in a second. Some of her act is actually an offendable crime, which is quite funny and downer for me at the same time. 10/10 mindblowingly insane mc. she need help, get her to a nearby therapist/hospital for the insane.

Good book, lot of sexyyy. Write more, i love your book. Me, representing the country India love your literature, and the way you represented the story. However there could be something that you can fix, especially with the words..