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Creator of Repent In Purgatory ☠ The hero y'all don't need but deserve, delivering wonderful content for all to enjoy! Creativity is how far you stretch an idea not restrain it!

2021-10-04 UnidoGlobal
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  • Hero_DarkyDark
    Hero_DarkyDark2yr
    Postado

    This review is based on the first three chapters but so far I am interested. It's a neat story idea to see a story about martial arts exception from the judges' point of view. It's an aspect of a story that's just waiting to be explored. My criticism is that the beginning seems to be a little slow at first as we don't get much about the main character in the first chapter except a few lines saying what he was. I'm excited to see where this story will go and if the quality would improve.

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  • Hero_DarkyDark
    Hero_DarkyDark2yr
    Comentou

    Well they seem like a fun bunch of people to be judges

    Ch 1 Introductions
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  • Hero_DarkyDark
    Hero_DarkyDark2yr
    Respondeu a Black_lotus_2004

    Hey appreciate the criticism! I'm glad a lot of what I'm trying to get through to the reader is reaching! Yeah, updating consistently is going to be a bit hard in the coming weeks but hey I'll see how it goes. I'm trying to keep it to at least once a week. Hopefully I can continue to keep your interest!

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  • Hero_DarkyDark
    Hero_DarkyDark2yr
    Respondeu a Pro_Decks

    *Fixed it was originally civilly discussed but I decided to change Civilly to civil but forgot how that affected the word discussed

    Este número foi suprimido.
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  • Hero_DarkyDark
    Hero_DarkyDark2yr
    Respondeu a Pro_Decks

    thanks for finding this mistake, fixed it!

    Horrendous! Two-thirds of makes up reality, mired in unawareness and ignorance. No solace could be taken in our knowledge of the mortal plane either, as there are still many properties we've yet to realize or want to accept. Simply, horrendous.
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