Sam5ational
A random sugar rush inspiration made me a writer.
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Sam5ational2yrPostadoAuthor review here! I will make this as brief as possible. First and foremost, the start is slow. Heck, until now (chapter 30) MC still doesn't have his system! However, there is clear character and story development in every chapter! Chapters are incredibly short too so the story hasn't developed too far as the number suggests. I wanted to focus on the world-building and natural transition of what I thought would happen when you put normal, modern people in a world filled with blood and gore hence being slow. But all of these are based on my ideas and thoughts so some of the reactions you may not agree with. Information is explained when the situation needs it, so you can expect little to no sudden information dumps. But do keep in mind this is my first novel and inconsistencies, plot holes, and awful pacing is to be expected, however, I stitched and glued the mistakes and gaps as best as I could at the start so unless you're the type to read into every line, you won't find any errors. And if you do, please notify me by messaging on the paragraph so I can fix it. Prior to this, I only had 3 months of writing experience so I hope you stay with me on this journey! My updates are daily, but school makes it rather difficult to write. Regardless, I will make sure to at least post 2 chapters every week!
- Sam5ational2yrRespondeu a FairyMei
Holy shit
Heavy damage numbers floated and feathers scattered left and right, but even Liam was not able to dodge all the peckers. A few bloody gashes appeared on his body. - Sam5ational2yrComentou
+1 brain cell
Zok's three brain cells did not know whether the serpents were poisonous or not because he had never seen one before in his life. He only warned Kaira about the poison because of the text that appeared in front of him. It said to destroy the poison gland of the serpent, that meant one thing... the serpent could use poison. - Sam5ational2yrComentou
Animal harem? :0
At first, Zok thought maybe it was a couple of tribesmen who jumped to his rescue. But he soon realised how wrong he was as his vision got a bit better. The thing that saved him, was no man. But a wolf... the commander wolf. - Sam5ational2yrRespondeu a FalseProphet_
Understandable
People believed that they should have something like a chip, so they invented it, only to regret it later. A few centuries ago, they indeed made such a thing and everything turned sour not long after. The people grew restless because many people could get their information such as location, numbers and such, allowing the act of terror. Not long after that, terrorist organizations made an imitation and planted a small bomb in the chip, creating a mass panic when thousands of people's hands exploded simultaneously, so the world union banned it, reducing the futuristic technology into something like this. - Sam5ational2yrRespondeu a FalseProphet_
No, I'm flabbergasted on why you want terrorists to be this smart irl.
People believed that they should have something like a chip, so they invented it, only to regret it later. A few centuries ago, they indeed made such a thing and everything turned sour not long after. The people grew restless because many people could get their information such as location, numbers and such, allowing the act of terror. Not long after that, terrorist organizations made an imitation and planted a small bomb in the chip, creating a mass panic when thousands of people's hands exploded simultaneously, so the world union banned it, reducing the futuristic technology into something like this. - Sam5ational2yrRespondeu a FalseProphet_
Wait what-
People believed that they should have something like a chip, so they invented it, only to regret it later. A few centuries ago, they indeed made such a thing and everything turned sour not long after. The people grew restless because many people could get their information such as location, numbers and such, allowing the act of terror. Not long after that, terrorist organizations made an imitation and planted a small bomb in the chip, creating a mass panic when thousands of people's hands exploded simultaneously, so the world union banned it, reducing the futuristic technology into something like this. - Sam5ational2yrRespondeu a Chris_Cauton
Self-cest
Effect: A skill that allows the user to create a clone of himself. Due to the current skill rank, the user can only create the same body and control its movement. Other parts such as voice, skill, and so on are still locked. - Sam5ational2yrComentou
The duality of man
They started arguing and fighting. - Sam5ational2yrRespondeu a NebulaShadow
I don't think he'll become a dragon anytime soon. Joke. That comment just caught me off guard and got me to question my existence LOL.
Ben stared at her with sincere eyes. With his most respectful tone, he used his opener. "Can you draw me as a dragon?" - Sam5ational2yrComentou
I fucking love you Author. Never have I laughed this HARD reading before or even at all... This is literally at chapter 28 so I don't think you'll see this, but keep up the good work.
The McDonald's stock dropped that day for no apparent reason. - Sam5ational2yrRespondeu a NebulaShadow
...Why?
Ben stared at her with sincere eyes. With his most respectful tone, he used his opener. "Can you draw me as a dragon?"